Book #4: In Progress

I’m concerned about this book on a number of structural levels. Let’s list them here on paper so they’re not all knocking around in my head all day. 1. I think it takes too long to get Joe diagnosed. 2. Mentions of 4/15/13, Boston Marathon, makes this all happening in present day. If I want to advance Joe’s HD at all, even assuming he’s at least 7 years in from page 1, we have to go into the future. At least 3 years, probably 5? Do you want to write about these characters in 2016, 2018? Is that too weird? You can drop out all reference to 4/15, but then the Red Sox references to post season play will have to jibe with previous seasons. That’s doable. But I like the mentions of 4/15 and how

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